Sunday, June 19, 2011
What Do You Think About My Poem?
I like the fact that you kept it kind of happy even though its not a happy poem if you get me. Also i like that you put lots of emotion into it and your feelings. However if you want to change it i think the stanza's need to be structured better like the lines are short then long and it doesnt look as good as it does if the lines are near the same length (does that make sense ? :S lol) And im not going to say change it cause i dont think it needs to be changed but if you want to its up to you :) keep writing it was good and thanks for your answer on my poem! You should sign up to www.allpoetry.com its a really good poetry site where you can upload your poems and people read an comment them if you do sign up add me my username is XuniqueXangelX :)
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